Sunday, 1 June 2008

Steep

i could walk ahead without looking back
i could step back without losing ground
and yet...
there were glitters on the road
i stopped to see
there were yearning pulses
i often skipped by
and yet...
there were words I learnt
but suddenly, phases forgot
there were more destinations laid -
the journey curtailed

and yet...
let go let go
let go and move on
i heard over and over
i was puzzled,
should i walk run or hop
i don't know when i had stopped

looks like the endless battle is now over
the storm is humming winds
i saw the river ripple my face
and yet ...
i just sailed along

they’re painting images with identities
i am bound by several words
and yet...
i can walk ahead without looking back
i can step back without losing ground

2 comments:

  1. oye this one is so good....where u high when u wrote this....this sounds so psychedelic....very colorful....dunno why but reminds me of pink floyd and simon and garfunkel at the same time....brilliant poetry....

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  2. Hey Thanks!!! That whole pink floyd and S&G was surely a high ... :-)

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